Emerging Schloars - Child Trafficking in Cambodia

I was extremely disturbed by this paper, however Laura's goal was to raise awareness about this issue.  By providing the information and statistics that she did, she definitely got my attention. It disgusts me that not only is the government is in on it, but their are people out there sick enough to have sex with a child. She had many strengths, her passion in the topic showed throughout the paper. I also like how she mentioned OPTIONS.  Her weaknesses would have to be that it was kind of all over the place. If this is supposed to be a research paper, she didn't really follow the typical guidelines. However, the paper was effective in terms of emotion. I really enjoyed reading it and becoming acquainted with the obvious problem in Cambodia. It motivated me to want to help.